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Utopia by ~shift-null:iconshift-null:



Today I walked into school, and as I stood in the crowded lobby, waiting for the mass doors to be open, I was seperated from my friends. This significant layer of space surrounded me and only me. Crowded hall and yet only I should have a atmosphere of space upon which no one stepped. I looked at the people around... so many faces, each one telling a tragic yet beautiful story of its own. Then I stared blankly at my reflection in one of the windows. I am just as tragic yet just as beautiful as well. I'm am alone, yet apart of everything. I am nowhere, yet everywhere possible. I don't know what it was I felt... joy, love, pain, hurt, utopia... but I felt my heart overflow. Tranquil yet contemplative in thought, I stood there until I was told to move along... Just observing, admiring, thinking..... All the questions that ever consumed my heart were answered. Where am I? Who am I? Who Cares for me?... None of it matters..... I am alive and that is the best thing ever. Happiness isn't just a word, it's a real thing.
©2003-2008 ~shift-null
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~lollipop-tradgedy:iconlollipop-tradgedy: Nov 21, 2003, 8:04:34 PM
whoa damn thats good, deep too. It struck a nerve and my heart flutterd while reading it.


:: owch:: a cd just fell on my head and scared me while i was writting that.....lmao...owch
~Allegius:iconAllegius: Nov 21, 2003, 8:18:27 PM
I don't quite understand how the title relates to the piece. I also don't quite understand the piece itself. It seems to musings and self-analyzations that come to the ultimate conclusion that happiness is external to existance and no matter what, someone can be happy.... am i right? but you also say happiness is a "Real thing" do you mean thing as in something material or thing as in it merely has existance?
~locked-away:iconlocked-away: Nov 21, 2003, 9:47:53 PM
and you dont seem to understand
a shame that you seem that all is bad
and all the things you hold so dear
will turn to whisper in your ear
^_^ annoying yet? I LOVE LAIN! anyways
*reads the poem thingy* YOUR DAMN RIGHT! wooo (warning its midnight and im crazy)

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Authority isn't the truth
Truth is the authority!
~shift-null:iconshift-null: Nov 22, 2003, 12:23:00 AM
The entire thing is supposed to be self analytical, the message was about living in the moment, and not in the past or future. I'm saying that happiness can be found when you let go of memories of yesterday and hopes for tomorrow and just live in the now. better?

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We are all one humanity...